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I step off the train
I'm walkin' down your street again
Past your door
I guess you don't live there anymore
It's years since you've been there
And now you've disappeared somewhere
Like outer space
You've found some better place

Could you be dead?
You always were two steps ahead
Of ev'ryone
We'd walk behind while you would run
I look up at your house
And I can almost hear you shout, down to me
Where I always used to be

Back on the train
I ask why did I come again
Can I confess?
I've been hangin' 'round your old address
And the years have proved
To offer nothin' since you moved
You're long gone
But I can't move on
 
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Avatar Aminal

 12/12/07 @575

Nice concept. I don't like the central line across the photo, what is that? its a bit distracting. Not sure about the lyrics either, a bit much...maybe take a few lines would be better?
 
Avatar Madanapale

 12/12/07 @693

Nice abstract and colors.
Carlos
 
Avatar Daykan

 12/12/07 @694

yeah, great concept!!
 
Avatar Vasco

 12/12/07 @752

It almost looks like a fence and not shoes! Nice work!
 
Avatar oldskool87

 12/12/07 @766

nice
 
Avatar moserArtist

 12/12/07 @767

All looks good apart from that foreground mid section blurred item.
 
Avatar MertAcar

 12/12/07 @778

I agree with Patrick about that blurred item middle of the photo but I like mood here that you created:)

+9

Mert
 
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Full Name:
  Debz
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