What is the though behind the left composition in your "collage"?

Nice concept and composition with the one at the right...
I also wonder about the left one.
Carlos

I'm also not sure about the left one! Loved the right, but the left...

Could I suggest cropping 50% off the left side image? The collage would then be split 1/3 (you?) and 2/3 (father?) - the 50/50 split feels a bit 'static'.... hmm but perhaps that is part of your meaning...
Overall the image has a grey bleakness, even the sky (which I assume represents freedom) has an oppressive feel to it.
An interesting conceptual piece.

Well.. for the left image.. yes it's me. I wanted to show that I'm weak, vulnerable, hopeless and useless. How hard I try to fly up, it's always gonna be fail and fail again. I feel so small, people won't even care.... I probably don't have anything good to offer to the world. The background(sky) represents the world(and things around me)...
Hope this explains well.. thank you all for the response, I appreciate it a lot. =]

Cool!

oh and yes i purposely made it 50/50. just try to 'exaggerate' how small i am and how i am so 'cornered' by things... he he ..

I agree with Traff's suggestion with 1/3 to 2/3 ratio. And yes, I like the concept very much - as an abstract it's great for me.

very good concept! the left is still hard to recognice (but your discription was helpful!) I'd probably made it B&W, and add some grain to increase the mood.
the half-half composition works well for me. and I love the effect of the multiple exposure on the right.

well done!

An admirable concept but its execution falls short when you must explain it to people (in my humble opinion). I like the image at the right. How did you achieve this reverse refection?

MsMichelleLynn : Thanks a lot for your critic ! I totally agree with you.. after got many responses from people, looks like I've failed. oh well.. haha..
Well actually these were taken by digital camera.. so yeah I used Photoshop to make the reverse thingy... thanks once again !